Thursday, February 6, 2025

Summary + Thesis + Supports #Draft 3

Thesis statement (your assertion): With this ground-breaking technology, the Atom developed by XYZ Reality,  the construction industry has an extraordinary future in eliminating rework and in boosting productivity.

Support #1: holds the potential to significantly eliminate rework.

Support #2: plays a notable role in boosting productivity

Counterargument: Implementation costs & Integrating into the AI

Conclusion: In conclusion, XYZ Reality's the Atom hold a crucial place in the future of civil engineering.

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1 comment:

  1. Brad BlackstoneFebruary 7, 2025 at 10:15 PM

    The phrasing in your thesis is awkward, but I see alignment between the controlling ideas and the two main supports.

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